Tuesday, 11 June 2013

Jerry and his Cheeseburger

One extremely thundery day Jerry was walking in the harbour (for no reason) ordering his cheeseburger. But he walked on a pirate ship called McDonald's.

They sailed all the way under Africa over North America and stopped at the Falkland Is. There weren't many inhabitants there. Oh I Forgot to introduce the pirates! There was Captain Flanks, Pirate Pete and SKULLS. Pirate Pete said "There's a visitor " "Er, Shiver me timber's" said Captain Flanks in a grumpy voice. "He looks feisty." Jerry was looking his usual self and very cheerful. Jerry asked SKULLS if they had cell service or any cheeseburgers Pirate Pete said they could sail him to America Jerry said okay and they sailed off. 

Finally they made it to Austin, Texas where Jerry lived. They went to Carl's Jr. and bought 4 cheeseburgers. SKULLS didn't eat his so he gave it to Captain Flanks. Pirate Pete tried to steal Jerry's so he took Pirate Pete's.

                         THE END.      

By Luke                                                                                                          

Wednesday, 15 May 2013

Welcome

Welcome to room 8's writing blog! Here you will be able to read the wonderful writing created by room 8 students at Clevedon school. Please comment on our work. You can start by saying what you liked about our writing and then suggest ways we could improve! We look forward to getting your feedback. Enjoy!