Thursday 7 November 2013

Horible factory farming

I strongly believe anyone caught factory farming should be fined and banned from animals can you imagine being looked up all your life not being able to light and turn around.Well some animals do.Hen are forced to lay eggs and if 
not they are KILLED.
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Its very cruel because all they want is eggs meat and money.Did you know 6 BILLION pigs are killed every year.Away to stop it is to bye free range instead of caged.Its sad just thing about it but something has to be done.What help dose it do we have free rang and its better and dose not make you sick.Just think about it a world with no factory farming.NOW that will be good really good.
                     factory farming
some people think factory farming dose not mater !!!
some people don't know what it is!!!
well I do and I think its cruel.
why on eath do people factory farm?
why don't they free range?
some people are out of there minds.
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ANIMALS get sick.BYE free range.
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I have animals and i love them.You can adopt animals that have been rescued but the state is herendis.
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SO That's why I think it is bad because it is cruel makes you sick free range is better,animals can't turn around ,it makes us sick,it kills animals and its out right wrong.so please help me end factory farming before  it ends us.   

8 comments:

  1. Caley your story was very convincing but I still buy factory eggs.
    Luke.

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    2. Caley you shouldn't put capital letters in the middle of your story.
      Luke

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  2. nice Caley I like your ending

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  3. good strong words next time put in more proofe by chloe

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  4. Good job Caley.I liked how your ending ended .Next time talk about other things [like cows] From Felix Maddison.

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  5. wow caley I liked how you know alot about factory farming next time can you make it a bit longer amy

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